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		<title>Presentation: from receive through react to interact</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Oct 2009 19:45:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Someone I follow on Twitter was at the Higher Education Web Association&#8217;s conference in Milwaukee this week.  HighEdWeb is &#8220;an organization of Web professionals working at institutions of higher education. We design, develop, manage and map the futures of higher education Web sites.&#8221; What caught my eye were tweets about yesterday&#8217;s general session.  (Session description)  [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.highedweb.org/"><img class="alignleft" src="http://2009.highedweb.org/images/highedwebassociation.png" alt="" width="138" height="107" /></a>Someone I follow on Twitter was at the Higher Education Web Association&#8217;s <a href="http://2009.highedweb.org/">conference</a> in Milwaukee this week.  HighEdWeb is &#8220;an organization of Web professionals working at institutions of higher education. We design, develop, manage and map the futures of higher education Web sites.&#8221;</p>
<p>What caught my eye were tweets about yesterday&#8217;s general session.  (<a href="http://2009.highedweb.org/davidgalper.aspx">Session description</a>)  These were live tweets&#8211;in other words, a backchannel.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><em>One interpretation of  &#8220;backchannel&#8221; is a <strong>public </strong></em><em>display of comments in real time&#8211;for example, on a screen visible to participants and to presenter.  The keynote didn&#8217;t include such a screen, and apparently the speaker wasn&#8217;t following tweets with the #heweb09 hashtag. </em></p>
<p>Almost from the start, things didn&#8217;t look good at the Keynote Corral:</p>
<ul>
<li>hella drop shadow</li>
<li>too much background music</li>
<li>We&#8217;ve had two keynotes, neither of whom build websites</li>
<li>conspiracy theory about the keynote: it&#8217;s a test of the power of the back channel; social experiment.</li>
<li>Can we say preaching to the choir? Save this speech for my faculty</li>
<li>watching people try to figure out how they can get out, starting to see the OMG I AM TRAPPED looks on faces</li>
</ul>
<p>Those came in the opening 15 minutes.  From noon till 1 p.m., there were some 550 tweets with the #heweb09 hashtag, the vast majority related to the keynote.  (You can see the entire day&#8217;s stream <a href="http://wthashtag.com/transcript.php?page_id=5224&amp;start_date=2009-10-06&amp;end_date=2009-10-06&amp;tz=2%3A00&amp;export_type=HTML">here</a>.  Warning: it gets snarky, but it&#8217;s instructive.)</p>
<p>Honestly, I&#8217;d hate this to be about <em>my</em> presentation.  One <a href="http://friendfeed.com/hollyrae">participant </a>used the term &#8220;harshtag.&#8221;  I liked the color of that, and Holly Rae was kind enough to talk with me later so I could understand the context better.  And we agreed on a number of points, including how much you can learn if you <em>do</em> pay attention to what&#8217;s going on.</p>
<p>This post isn&#8217;t about this particular conference or keynote, but about how we connect professionally. I tend to see &#8220;formal presentation&#8221; as something like the Nobel laureate lecture; what I&#8217;m talking about is any &#8220;structured presentation&#8221; &#8212; a planned event where one or more people focus on a topic with other people at the same time.</p>
<p>I believe we&#8217;re moving from <em>audience</em> (those who <strong>hear</strong>) to <em>participants<strong> </strong></em>(those who <strong>take part</strong>).  From <em>receiving </em> through <em>reacting </em>to <em><strong>inter</strong>acting</em>.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/spine/206853003/"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-2867" title="Participant instructions at a comedy club." src="http://www.daveswhiteboard.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/10/heckle.jpg" alt="Participant instructions at a comedy club." width="263" height="350" /></a>Not all participation is necessarily positive: in the #heweb09 stream, you&#8217;ll find wisecracks, distractions, and just plain mockery.  And a publicly-displayed backchannel can give extra weight to comments from those who comment on the backchannel.  (It&#8217;s a fact.)</p>
<p>The presenter didn&#8217;t see the stream, and the Twitters knew he didn&#8217;t, but no one seems to have stood up and said, &#8220;Hey, you&#8217;re talking down to us.&#8221;  What would have happened?  I have no idea&#8211;but I&#8217;ll tell you this: I&#8217;m primed for someone saying that to me some day.</p>
<p>Still&#8230;</p>
<p>The wisecracks and distractions are there anyway.  You&#8217;ve made them yourself, to your neighbor or just to your appreciative self.  One thing the backchannel does is make them visible&#8211;which means if you as a participant are only a buffoon, your buffoonery will be more widely evident, just as the presenter&#8217;s shortcomings or skills are.</p>
<p>The backchannel also offers the potential for immediate feedback.  It invited participant to contribute to and enrich the discussion &#8212; via links, via information they came in with, via ideas to explore later.  And even, as with Holly Rae, by what you say that catches someone else&#8217;s attention so you can connect later.</p>
<p>To say nothing of a <strong>presenter </strong>(or part of a presenting team) deciding to monitor and respond to the stream.  Just like &#8220;any questions,&#8221; only with bits.  And with the possibility of using the stream after the fact, as I&#8217;ve done here.</p>
<p>Yes, people could have spoken out, but at live sessions you&#8217;ve been to, who raises a hand?  Who asks questions?  Who adds something?  The framework doesn&#8217;t always encourage this behavior, especially in large keynote sessions.</p>
<p>In fact, the main feedback mechanism we currently have, other than mutters and groans, is people voting with their feet: heading out the door, something I saw once when a person whose work I admired make an amateurish, unrehearsed, poorly organized, one-way presentation.</p>
<p>This isn&#8217;t a <em>coming</em> phenomenon; it&#8217;s here.  Maybe you didn&#8217;t see it much at the <a href="http://www.astd2009.org/">ASTD ICE</a> conference or the <a href="http://www.ispi.org/content.aspx?id=308&amp;linkidentifier=id&amp;itemid=308">ISPI</a> conference, though I&#8217;d argue it&#8217;s because those two organizations are further behind than they suspect. I&#8217;d like to be going to <a href="http://www.elearningguild.com/content.cfm?selection=doc.1275">DevLearn 09</a>, where I expect participants will insist on a high level of participation.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><em>Revised and updated on Oct. 10:</em></p>
<ul>
<li>Here are <a href="http://www.dontgetcaught.biz/webdocs/blog/2009/10/speakers-learn-from-twitter-hecklers.html">practical suggestions</a> for presenters from Denise Graveline &#8212; whom I learned about, of course, from my conversation with Holly Rae.</li>
<li>Further context, details, and opinion from me in <a href="http://www.daveswhiteboard.com/archives/2874">a more recent post</a> (links to, comments from HEWEB attendees).</li>
<li>As part of the revision, I got Denise&#8217;s name right.</li>
</ul>
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Comedy-club &#8220;no heckling&#8221; sign by <a href="http://www.flickr.com/people/spine/">Rick Audet</a>.</p>
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		<title>Social software: those who can, do</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Oct 2008 19:45:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Don Clark&#8217;s new blog, Big Dog Little Dog, let me to Tom Davenport&#8217;s musings about Web 2.0 at Harvard Business Publishing. Davenport holds the President&#8217;s Chair in Information Technology and Management at Babson College, which makes some of his reaction all the more puzzling. He asks whether we&#8217;ve all gotten &#8220;a little overly precious&#8221; and [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Don Clark&#8217;s new blog, <a href="http://bdld.blogspot.com/">Big Dog Little Dog</a>, let me to Tom Davenport&#8217;s <a href="http://discussionleader.hbsp.com/davenport/2008/10/is_web_20_living_on_thin_air.html">musings about Web 2.0</a> at <em>Harvard Business Publishing.</em> Davenport holds the President&#8217;s Chair in Information Technology and Management at Babson College, which makes some of his reaction all the more puzzling.</p>
<p><a href="http://flickr.com/photos/strahl/2488108400/"><img title="Caffeine: the lubricant of social software" src="http://www.daveswhiteboard.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/laptop_starbucks-300x200.jpg" alt="Caffeine: the lubricant of social software" width="300" align="left" /></a>He asks whether we&#8217;ve all gotten &#8220;a little overly precious&#8221; and wonders how we can produce value &#8220;if we&#8217;re all sitting around blogging and Facebook-friending.&#8221;</p>
<p>Hey, I like making fun of the trendy (a group I&#8217;m not personally acquainted with), and there&#8217;s enough silliness and bandwagon-riding in the technology world to last at least till the bicentennial of Canada.  Even so, I think Davenport is possibly worrying too much about too little when he  wonders &#8220;whether social media can really be the basis of a solid economy.&#8221;</p>
<p>Probably not &#8212; but that seems like a lot to ask from a wiki, a blog, or a network site.  I don&#8217;t expect my fax machine to be the &#8220;basis&#8221; of my consulting practice, but it&#8217;s a handy tool for certain tasks.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t look to Facebook or LinkedIn to replace how I network, but they extend my potential reach, expand the ways in which I connect, and cost a hell of a lot less than attending professional conferences for their meet-and-greet facets.</p>
<p>I haven&#8217;t found a great deal of professional use for Twitter yet, though several people whose opinions I value do.  Interestingly, a visit to my wife&#8217;s office might surprise Davenport as it did me.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.prsa.org/bin/c/y/prsa_logo_blue_swoosh.gif"><img style="border: 1px solid black;" src="http://www.prsa.org/bin/c/y/prsa_logo_blue_swoosh.gif" alt="" width="271" height="88" align="right" /></a>She is director of communications for a nonprofit, and gets the print version of <em>Public Relations Tactics</em>, a newsletter of PRSA (the Public Relations Society of America).  Some of the headlines on the front page of the October 2008 issue:</p>
<ul>
<li><strong>Twitter, the tweet smell of success</strong>
<ul>
<li>Maximizing the benefits of the micro-blogging service</li>
<li>How the application can be a powerful business tool</li>
</ul>
</li>
<li><strong>Streamlining social networks with FriendFeed</strong></li>
<li><strong>Delivering digital discourses in a YouTube age</strong></li>
<li><strong>Connecting to communities through Facebook groups</strong></li>
</ul>
<p>One article offers &#8220;10 ways that companies can use Twitter&#8221; from a PR standpoint, from monitoring tweets from reporters (like those looking for spokespeople or sources), to Twittering at a conference or trade show, to managing reputation (for example, by responding to individuals who tweet about the company).</p>
<p>Another article by Joan Stewart (<a href="http://publicityhound.net/">&#8220;The Publicity Hound&#8221;</a>) shares the consultant&#8217;s experience &#8212; and how it changed the way she works.</p>
<blockquote><p>When I first heard about Twitter, I couldn&#8217;t believe busy people would waste time writing about what they were doing in carefully edited 140-character messages.</p>
<p>Now that I&#8217;ve been actively Twittering for several months, I find it hard to understand why more companies and nonprofits don&#8217;t use this powerful communication tool to monitor public comment about their brand and push their marketing message.</p>
<p>Smart Twitterers do more than that.  They rely on this tool for crisis communication.  Some use it to spot customer service problems almost immediately and respond far more quickly than their expensive customer call centers ever could.</p></blockquote>
<p>I&#8217;ve been looking lately for examples like this &#8212; people tackling work problems with technology.  I don&#8217;t know Joan Stewart, but I&#8217;m pretty sure she hasn&#8217;t dropped all her other public relations tools in favor of Twitter &#8212; she&#8217;s just found a new one that produces results she values.</p>
<p id="attrib_c">Caffeinated social software photo by <a href="http://flickr.com/people/strahl/">Phil Strahl</a>.</p>
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		<title>Giving good audio, or, I see what you&#8217;re saying</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Sep 2008 21:22:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Some time ago, I came across Boxes and Arrows, a journal concerned with design: graphic design, interaction design, information architecture and so on. In the September 2008 issue, Jens Jacobsen talks about information architecture for audio.Â  As he points out, audio is linear. &#8220;You can only consume it in a linear fashion and you have [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://boxesandarrows.com/"><img style="border: 1px solid black; margin: 10px;" src="http://boxesandarrows.com/assets/custom/484/banda_logo.gif" alt="" width="202" height="25" align="right" /></a>Some time ago, I came across <a href="http://boxesandarrows.com/">Boxes and Arrows</a>, a journal concerned with design: graphic design, interaction design, information architecture and so on.</p>
<p>In the September 2008 issue, <a href="http://www.boxesandarrows.com/person/13571-jjaco">Jens Jacobsen</a> talks about <a href="http://www.boxesandarrows.com/view/information150">information architecture for audio</a>.Â  As he points out, audio is linear.  &#8220;You can only consume it in a linear fashion and you have to listen to it at a given speed.&#8221;</p>
<blockquote><p>When beginning an audio-related project, ask yourself whether audio is the right medium for your message. In some cases, text is a better choice and in other cases itâ€™s video. Donâ€™t use audio just because you can. If you are certain audio is the best choice, there are several fields to help inform how you implement it.</p></blockquote>
<p>Jacobsen offers several guidelines from different fields.  It&#8217;s worth reading the entire post; these are simply highlights from different field &#8212; like information architecture:</p>
<ul>
<li><strong>State the length.</strong> Let people know how long the audio&#8217;s going to be.</li>
<li><strong>Introduce the topic.</strong> &#8220;In printed text&#8230;[this] might seem hackneyed, but with audio&#8230; it&#8217;s best not to jump right into the topic.&#8221;</li>
<li> <strong>Provide orientation from time to time.</strong> Let the listener know where he as and what&#8217;s coming next.  In a long piece, consider giving an option to skip sections via the interface.</li>
</ul>
<p>From journalism:</p>
<ul>
<li><strong>Keep it short.</strong> (My opinion: because it&#8217;s one way, five minutes of audio feels a lot longer than five minutes of conversation.)</li>
<li><strong>Repeat often. </strong>Jakobsen means a summary at the end, but also repeat the main subjects or themes.Â  Don&#8217;t refer to them by pronouns or synonyms.Â  <em>You</em> know what you&#8217;re talking about, but your listener has nothing to go on but short-term memory.</li>
<li><strong>Take advantage of the possibilities. </strong> Change the style of speech, the tone, the speed.</li>
</ul>
<p>I especially like the suggestion, &#8220;Don&#8217;t overuse the thesaurus.&#8221;  If you&#8217;re calling people learners, don&#8217;t change them into users, then stakeholders, then students, then knowledge partners.<br />
Suggestions from usability engineering:</p>
<ul>
<li><strong>Design for the target audience. </strong> &#8220;Convince your design team to produce content for the users, not its creators.&#8221;</li>
<li><strong>Create personas.</strong> Represent your target audience in the audio.</li>
<li><strong>Create scenarios.</strong> You&#8217;ve got those personas sitting around waiting for osmething to do.</li>
<li><strong>Test with users.</strong></li>
</ul>
<p>On that last point: in my experience, there isn&#8217;t a lot of testing of audio for things like online learning.  It&#8217;s as if having a professional voice (or [shudder] your boss&#8217;s boss&#8217;s voice) will overcome any shortcomings in the text.  That&#8217;s the audio equivalent of believing that if you choose the right font, your text will be more understandable &#8212; as opposed to easier to read.</p>
<p>Although interface guru Jakob Nielson recommends usability testing with &#8220;<a href="http://www.useit.com/alertbox/20000319.html">only five users</a>,&#8221; you can see from the chart in his article that it&#8217;s possible to benefit from tryouts with just two or three people.</p>
<p>There&#8217;s all kinds of audio in learning: voiceovers, audio as part of video, and plain vanilla podcasts.  If you&#8217;re going through the trouble to deliver information via audio, it makes sense to think about ways to make the optimum delivery.Â  Boxes and Arrows is all about delivery.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><a href="http://www.radiomarconi.com/marconi/vatican_radio_3.jpg"><img class="aligncenter" src="http://www.radiomarconi.com/marconi/vatican_radio_3.jpg" alt="1931: noted on-air personality Pope Pius XI, with the creator of the Vatican radio system, Guglielmo Marconi. " width="560" height="402" /></a></p>
<p id="attrib_c">1931: noted on-air personality Pope Pius XI, with (at right) founder of the Vatican radio system, Guglielmo Marconi.</p>
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		<title>Losing Face(book)</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Sep 2008 01:19:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Social networking and preciousness (click screen shots for larger images): Apathy or indifference?Â  Always a close call. Maybe Facebook can divert some of its talent from ginning up yet more ads and figure out how to recognize an obscure browser like Firefox 3. Follow-up: Like Christy and Manish, who commented, I&#8217;d been using Firefox 3 [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Social networking and preciousness (click screen shots for larger images):</p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><a href="http://www.daveswhiteboard.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/09/facebook1.jpg"><img class="aligncenter size-full wp-image-497" title="Definitely not cool enough" src="http://www.daveswhiteboard.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/09/facebook1.jpg" alt="Definitely not cool enough" width="500" height="143" /></a></p>
<p style="text-align: left;">Apathy or indifference?Â  Always a close call.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><a href="http://www.daveswhiteboard.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/09/facebook2.jpg"><img class="size-full wp-image-498 aligncenter" title="Smart, but not smart enough" src="http://www.daveswhiteboard.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/09/facebook2.jpg" alt="Smart, but not smart enough" width="500" height="242" /></a></p>
<p style="text-align: left;">Maybe Facebook can divert some of its talent from ginning up yet more ads and figure out how to recognize an obscure browser like Firefox 3.</p>
<hr />
<em>Follow-up:</em></p>
<p>Like Christy and Manish, who commented, I&#8217;d been using Firefox 3 for some time.Â  The actual problem resulted from an upgrde to ZoneAlarm Security Suite, without which I wouldn&#8217;t turn on the computer.</p>
<p>From the start, I figured it was something like that.Â  What annoyed me more than the inability to get to Facebook, though, was the cutesy-smug style of the error message.</p>
<p>&#8220;Sorry, we&#8217;re not cool enough to support your browser.&#8221;Â  Ignoring the faux humility, the fact is that Facebook had no idea whatsoever what browser I was using.Â  Maybe a cookie needed to be reset; maybe some security level was too high.Â  Still, it&#8217;s usually better to realize you don&#8217;t know what you&#8217;re talking about &#8212; or at least to beat others to that conclusion.</p>
<p>As for &#8220;please keep it real?&#8221;Â  A minor irritation, like ham-handed attempts at humor in online learning.</p>
<p>Don&#8217;t <em>try</em> so hard, Facebook.</p>
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		<title>New blogger: George Orwell</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Aug 2008 21:34:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Well, technically, it&#8217;s not a blog. And technically, the author is Eric Blair, though George Orwell is the best known of his pen names. The Orwell Prize (&#8220;Britain&#8217;s pre-eminient prize for political writing,&#8221; if they do say so themselves) is publishing George Orwell&#8217;s diaries as a blog. They began a few weeks ago and will [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img src="http://www.george-orwell.org/~sub/images/george-orwell-2.jpg" alt="" width="250" align="right" />Well, technically, it&#8217;s not a blog. And technically, the author is Eric Blair, though George Orwell is the best known of his pen names.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.theorwellprize.co.uk/home.aspx">The Orwell Prize</a> (&#8220;Britain&#8217;s pre-eminient prize for political writing,&#8221; if they do say so themselves) is publishing <a href="http://orwelldiaries.wordpress.com/about/">George Orwell&#8217;s diaries</a> as a blog.</p>
<p>They began a few weeks ago and will post his entries in real time, 70 years to the day after each was written.  He began the diaries on August 9th, 1938 and kept them till October, 1942.  So we&#8217;ve got a just-started blog that&#8217;s guaranteed to last for the next four years.  Get your feeder ready.</p>
<p>A splendid joining of technology (blog software) with one of the most observant writers of the twentieth century.  As a partner for <a href="http://www.bartleby.com/141/">The Elements of Style</a>, it&#8217;s hard to argue with Orwell&#8217;s <a href="http://www.orwell.ru/library/essays/politics/english/e_polit">Politics and the English Language</a> (1946) &#8212; and I&#8217;m not talking just about politics.</p>
<p>More than one blogger (including me) could take on board advice like this:</p>
<ol>
<li>Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.</li>
<li>Never use a long word where a short one will do.</li>
<li>If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.</li>
<li>Never use the passive where you can use the active.</li>
<li>Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.</li>
<li>Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.</li>
</ol>
<p>A while back, I read the four-volume <em>George Orwell: Collected Essays, Journalism, and Letters</em>, edited by Ian Angus and Sonia Orwell (George&#8217;s widow).  Different content from his diaries, but just as widely ranging, from book criticism to short notes to friends to a letter suggesting four possible pen names to use on <em>Animal Farm.</em> (He seems to have left the choice up to his agent and his publisher. )</p>
<p><em><a href="http://www.amazon.com/George-Orwell-1920-1940-Collected-Journalism/dp/1567921337/ref=pd_sim_b_1"><img class="alignnone" src="http://www.spartacus.schoolnet.co.uk/Jorwellbook6.jpg" alt="" width="150" height="214" /></a> <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Country-Right-Left-1940-1943-Journalism/dp/1567921345/ref=pd_bxgy_b_text_b"><img class="alignnone" style="margin-left: 2px; margin-right: 2px;" src="http://www.fantasticfiction.co.uk/images/x1/x7610.jpg" alt="" width="150" height="214" /></a><a href="http://www.amazon.com/George-Orwell-1943-1945-Collected-Journalism/dp/1567921353/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;s=books&amp;qid=1219785076&amp;sr=8-1"><img src="http://images.artnet.com/images_US/magazine/features/finch/finch7-12-07-1s.jpg" alt="" width="150" height="214" /></a> <a href="http://www.amazon.com/George-Orwell-1943-1945-Collected-Journalism/dp/1567921353/ref=pd_bxgy_b_text_b"><img src="http://www.spartacus.schoolnet.co.uk/Jorwellbook7.jpg" alt="" width="150" height="214" /> </a></p>
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